
It was a tedious day, I was sitting near the window, and light breeze was coming towards me. Our street was very boisterous, some children were playing cricket. I was looking captivatingly at a boy who was trying to pilfer the glimpse of a pretty girl by screening his bike stunts but she never saw him. From somewhere far across the street I could hear the song ….
“Show me the meaning of being lonely is this feeling that I need to walk with,
Tell me why I can’t be there where you are, there something missing in my heart.”
Feeling very much bored I opened my slam book. The first page was filled by best friend Harika. She was my childhood friend, every time I open this I could not stop laughing looking at what she filled about me: “I can only say that you are my alterego, you are my shadow, you are my everything (hope you will return my 1000 rupees)”.Thinking where she is now and what she could be doing, I turned to the next page it was my friend Vamsi. We were the only mischievous boys in our class and I hope Usha, my classmate could better describe us how mischievous we were. I was Feeling happy thinking about all those days spent with them and was feeling sad when I remember that I miss them now. I closed the slam book, than I saw a greeting card, I opened that and was looking who has given it to me.
“hI rahul Last night I was thinking Of you,Vhat should i prEsent You On yoUr b’day”
Than thought that nothing, more than telling you many many happy returns of the day.
- Keerthi.
P.S: No part of the story is true expect expressing my hobbies i.e. turning the pages of my slam book and looking the greetings gifted by my friends when I feel alone and bored……
13 comments:
first, i thought this is romantic story; but at last i hav found dat it is a sad story............she really left u in a dilemna whether to say "I LOVE U" or "I MISS U". i feel u shud say "I MISS U FOREVER". u hav really included wat we feel while refering our slam books. GUD work dude.keep it up. WITING FOR UR NEXT POST
nice plot...but a bit orthodox like the conventional movie plot..i said this a conventional movie plot...cos i have r\written a sad lav story...which has less or more..same ending..but wid different paramaters...but...getting good wid ur presentation blog by blog...kewl..keep blogging...
good one from you prasad
nice blog keep writting
all d best for ur future blogs
hmmm start was gud ...real hats off to ur imagination...but the ending is common man...yet its best. awaiting ur next blog!!!!!!!!!!!!!
the story is nice ,but little bit sorrowful
ur creativity is nice
nice story...keep posting ...
Real nice language. U r blogs will kindle the hearts of every one. Wat one thinks when they memorize their past. But one thing u need to be some wat sophisticated is u r grammar.U r writings have a greater % of feel factor that should not be undermined by the grammatical mistakes u make.Waitin for u r next blog
nice blog ... the start is really gud......ur imagination is mindblowing.... btw... u have got nice hobbies ..turnin the pages of slam books wen u r alone and bored .......and photography........hmmm... keep it up!!!!!!
wonderful prasad....!!niku intha manchi imagination undha??great!!!
chala bavundhi......
hi raa....gr8 twist. its th 1st blog i read without anyone's force....ohh, i m sorry. i read this also forcefully. but the force here is not created by anyone than my HEART...... chukka undhi raa.....if u ask wht shud u say, whthr "I LOVE U" or "I MISS U"..... i say u to say her "I LOVE U" if u really feel her LOVE or else thrs no need 4 me to say u tht u say "I MISS U" bcoz u however feel tht na. but 1 thing, if u really LOVE her then, u will b hving tht FEEL element eventhough she is nt thr with u or even she is nt thr in ths world as she will b always in UR HEART yaar...i think, i m right......
well I havent seen the blog till now.. good one though kani mana movie love and frenship story kada with happy ending ..... endhuku change chesav....hehehe really nice one
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